When opting for an occupation, many people are likely to put the most emphasis on the size of the salary offered. To some extent, I can not demur that income has a significant impact on people's lives; but, I also believe that it is not the determining factor. It is plain that money is crucial for everyone, especially the worker.
To begin with, money represents an employer's qualification. It indicates that if a person's total annual income is large when compared to low-paid workers, there will be no mistake about how well-qualified and productive he is; the level of wage recognizes either their capacity or their effort. As a consequence, some recruiting managers take it for granted that they would be able to find appropriate opponents in an appealing manner. Almost everyone, when considering applying for a job, seems to see how much money they can make per month whether it is high or not. Another argument is that there is still a strong correlation between the size of a person’s salary and their level of happiness. Nowadays, with the rising living standards and cost of living, people need to overwork to earn a reasonable amount of salary to meet their everyday expenses, such as food, clothing. Besides, one’s salary is very often a determinant of one’s social standing because in the perspective of many people, a person’s success, to a large extent, depends upon the size of their salary.
Nevertheless, I suppose that other factors are equally as imperative as how much money we make at our employment. initially when selecting a job, personal relationships and the atmosphere in the workplace have a profound influence. They prefer to work in an environment that is not too harsh. thus having a good manager or amicable coworkers, for example, can make an immense difference in workers' happiness and quality of life, eradicate stress while working. Second, many people's feelings of job satisfaction are based on their professional feats, the skills they learn, and the position they achieve, rather than the money they can earn. Finally, some people choose a career because they want to help others and make a positive contribution to society
In conclusion, income is extremely important, but it is not yet a deciding factor in people's employment decisions. It is also contingent on their preferences, hobbies, conditional work, and other factors .People should think about those factors thoroughly so they don't end up regretting their decision
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 37, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'employers'' or 'employer's'?
Suggestion: employers'; employer's
...r. To begin with, money represents an employers qualification. It indicates that if a p...
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Line 2, column 413, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in an appealing manner" with adverb for "appealing"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...d be able to find appropriate opponents in an appealing manner. Almost everyone, when considering appl...
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Line 3, column 48, Rule ID: EQUALLY_AS[1]
Message: Don't say 'equally as'. You can use either 'equally' or 'as' on its own. When comparing two nouns, use 'just as'.
Suggestion: equally; as; just as
...eless, I suppose that other factors are equally as imperative as how much money we make at...
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Line 3, column 114, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Initially
...w much money we make at our employment. initially when selecting a job, personal relation...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Thus
...n an environment that is not too harsh. thus having a good manager or amicable cowor...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: People
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
... about those factors thoroughly so they dont end up regretting their decision
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, finally, if, nevertheless, second, so, still, thus, well, while, for example, i suppose, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2076.0 1615.20841683 129% => OK
No of words: 408.0 315.596192385 129% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08823529412 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49433085973 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88784990041 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 237.0 176.041082164 135% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.580882352941 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 659.7 506.74238477 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.2394010044 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.117647059 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.58823529412 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0949071851526 0.244688304435 39% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0317997971541 0.084324248473 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0359911883625 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0582603626398 0.151304729494 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0376244349391 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.35 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 117.0 78.4519038076 149% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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