When designing a building, the most important feature is intended use of the building rather than its outward appearance. To what extent do you argree or disagree.
There has been some debate and people has been saying the most important aspect when designing the building is the exterior. I would argue that the construction purpose should be more valued than the appearance.
First, how the building work is the key to consider the design. There is a lot of building types such as commercial building, shopping centre, school and hospital. Each one has its own purpose and a particular design to serve it. Therefore it is crucial to focus on the functionality of the building, not the exterior. For instance, if a company intended to move to a new building, they would consider the design based on the working space to utilize the operation of staff.
Second, safe and comfort should be prioritized, not the beauty of the building. Although a good-looking building enhances the beauty of its surroundings, without meeting its basic function, it would be a waste. Specifically, one basic necessity of any building is safety, that is, it needs to be sturdy and durable. For example , a hospital has to possess a wide walkway, a good amount of rooms, emergency exits and can withstand unexpected circumstances. Without that things, a hospital can not perform the work fluently without satisfying the patient when they come to it.
In conclusion, both the exterior and interior are important factors in designing a building. However, if I had a limited budget and only could afford to choose one or the other, I would prefer the function of a building.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, look, second, so, therefore, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1241.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94422310757 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86582400296 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.557768924303 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 378.9 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.9125568144 49.4020404114 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 88.6428571429 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9285714286 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230954143413 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0765150775268 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.044029921707 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139434648857 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0439310703638 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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