Whether or not someone achieves their aims is mostly by a question of luck. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Opinions are mixed regarding whether luck is the primary determinant of success in achieving targets. Personally, I believe that success requires beyond luck.
On the one hand, there are some other factors which can be attributed to attainment of one’s goals. First and foremost, I advocate the notion that the role of determination is more significant than luck. Once one actually realises their needs to force themselves into doing such things, they have already gained their determination and passion, which, moreover, leads to their hard-working and industrious attitudes towards their goals. Secondly, some other elements such as appearance, social relationships and money do make a difference. We are now living in a fast-paced world, the first impressions always have a vital role to play, especially for those who are in their thirties and above, due to the fact that this is probably going to affect working environment. For instance, for some kinds of careers, namely those who work as actors, actresses or singers, in order to succeed, they have to create their best images to the audiences.
On the other hand, the element of fortune is necessary. Firstly, one’s emotions would certainly influence their performances. For example, whenever someone is in good mood, things result in much better conditions, but when things go unexpectedly, one can let themselves down unconsciously. Furthermore, nothing in this world is completely fair as there are plenty of errors or misunderstandings that actually exist. These would affect a quite great number of situations that people are in, and they are, of course, unavoidable.
To summarise, though luck is considered to be a thing that contributes to success, there are some other elements that can also decide the paths to our goals, whether they do smoothly or not.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, regarding, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, of course, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1541.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27739726027 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96020986853 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606164383562 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 473.4 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.5781471479 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.071428571 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8571428571 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.5 7.06120827912 163% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140982451058 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0457751186457 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0446284774398 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0914768631177 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.036803013272 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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