Which kind of accomodation would you like to live in?
I would like to live in a shared house rather than living alone. I think there are some advantages when you live in a shared house. The first of all, when you live in there you will have more friends and they can share everything with you. If you were sick your housemates can take care of you. The second is you can do things together such as: going shopping, cooking, doing housework,... It’s great to not have to do everything alone. And the finally is you can learn many skills from your friends. However, there are some disadvantages when you live in a shared house. The housemates can damage your furniture that make you angry and annoyed. If there are many housemates with the noise you can’t learn.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 241, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...and they can share everything with you. If you were sick your housemates can take ...
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Line 1, column 386, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , .
...going shopping, cooking, doing housework,... It's great to not have to do eve...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, however, if, second, so, i think, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 14.0 41.998997996 33% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 590.0 1615.20841683 37% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 129.0 315.596192385 41% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.57364341085 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.37013600491 4.20363070211 80% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41091502699 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 75.0 176.041082164 43% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.581395348837 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 189.0 506.74238477 37% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 12.0 20.2975951904 59% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 16.4076201809 49.4020404114 33% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 59.0 106.682146367 55% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.9 20.7667163134 62% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.1 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264654460016 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120861185079 0.084324248473 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0834576773972 0.0667982634062 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.264654460016 0.151304729494 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.5 13.0946893788 50% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.76 50.2224549098 135% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 11.3001002004 60% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.34 12.4159519038 67% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 5.7 8.58950901804 66% => OK
difficult_words: 12.0 78.4519038076 15% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.1190380762 67% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 22.4719101124 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.