While recruiting a new employee, the employer should pay more attention to their personal qualities, rather than qualification and experience. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give your opinion and relevant examples.
A section of individuals believe that employers should consider an applicants qualities than their experience and qualification when hiring them in a company. I would like to delve my viewpoints in the upcoming before making a final final note.
To begin with, employees are important assest of a company as they play a vital role in the development of an Organization. So, an applicant with qualities such as positive work attitude and strong work ethic may be more valuable in long term than someone with poor attitude. Moreover, in some positions such as management, qualities like soft skills are more considerable to be a part of team as compared to qualification of person because such type of skills are often more difficult to teach.
On the logger's head, some critics go against it. First and foremost, while qualities may be valuable, they may not always sufficient for certain roles that require specific technical skil. Futhermare, organizations sometimes face conflicts in workplace, so in such Type of cases, a person, a with valuable experience on top position can handle such sype of suitiation.
In the view of arguments above, one can conclude that employers should strive for balanced approach that consider both qualities and experience as the applicant is capable of performing their job effectively.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 228, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: final
...wpoints in the upcoming before making a final final note. To begin with, employees are i...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, may, moreover, so, while, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1117.0 1615.20841683 69% => OK
No of words: 214.0 315.596192385 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21962616822 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82475343497 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97911397866 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.621495327103 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 355.5 506.74238477 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.995963756 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.111111111 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7777777778 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.55555555556 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170677733926 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0650734776896 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0597378083858 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104513428534 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0301714340539 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 228, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: final
...wpoints in the upcoming before making a final final note. To begin with, employees are i...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, may, moreover, so, while, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1117.0 1615.20841683 69% => OK
No of words: 214.0 315.596192385 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21962616822 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82475343497 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97911397866 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.621495327103 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 355.5 506.74238477 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.995963756 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.111111111 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7777777778 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.55555555556 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170677733926 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0650734776896 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0597378083858 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104513428534 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0301714340539 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.