While recruiting a new employee,the employer should pay more attention to their personal qualities,rather than qualification and experience.To what extent do you agree or disagree.Give your opinion and include relevant examples.
Recruitment is a process adopted by organisation for selection of an employee for a particular job.Numerous factors are considered while selecting a person for a vacancy in a company.Some people agree that personal traits are more important than experience and education.This essay will describe my agree and disagree to this statement along with personal experience.
To begin with ,selection of right person to a specific job is utmost significant.Qualification and experience are the utmost crucial and indispensable factors.When companies are choosing a person especially on technical job then qualification is preliminary requirement .For an instance,job of an engineer,pilot and even for air hostess require a specific skill. In addition to this,jobs like doctors,judge and financial consultant also require for a jobs sort of particular education and experience.For an instance to be a Judge one should have to clear particular test,and to be a Doctor one must have MBBS degree.So a person cannot be a Doctor or a CA if he has good personality,Further more jobs like Beauticians,Teachers and Architects also required particular degree.Moreover experience is also a significant factor while selecting a person on an important job.Everyone can not do the job of a bank manager.Only a person with relevant experience can perform this job.Higher the job responsibility,so higher the experience required.Thus qualification and experience decides the nature of particular position.
On the flip side,personal traits are the basic of a specific assignment.These are bound to be considered whatsoever type of job may be.But these factors are not deciding factor for matching a person with different jobs.
So in the end, it can be concluded that personal attributes are important but qualification are deciding factors for selecting a person for a job.So i inclined towards qualification and experience are powerful factors for suitability for jobs.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, moreover, so, then, thus, while, in addition, sort of, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 27.0 8.3376753507 324% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1675.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.67796610169 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.89393122351 2.80592935109 139% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.51186440678 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 550.8 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 59.0 20.2975951904 291% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 190.62801473 49.4020404114 386% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 335.0 106.682146367 314% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 59.0 20.7667163134 284% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 17.6 7.06120827912 249% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 36.0 5.01903807615 717% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.107925890917 0.244688304435 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.071474652088 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0371296501485 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0777409558863 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0398494071529 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 34.8 13.0946893788 266% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -13.79 50.2224549098 -27% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 18.2 7.44779559118 244% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 29.8 11.3001002004 264% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 16.55 12.4159519038 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.74 8.58950901804 125% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 32.5 9.78957915832 332% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 25.6 10.1190380762 253% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 30.0 10.7795591182 278% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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