While some people consider global warming to be the most pressing environmental problem which we have at the moment, others believe that deforestation has a more devastating impact on our world. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.
It is often argued that nowadays the Earth faces with one of the biggest environmental problem, namely global warming, while other people disagree with this and consider deforestation as a more serious issue that affects on the world. This essay agrees that global warming is the most severe ecological concern that leads to climate change, whereas deforestation causes less significant effects on the environment and this issue can be solved easier. This essay will discuss both points of view.
It is clear that the atmosphere contains the ozone layer from carbon dioxide which protects the environment from the sun radiation. Without this not only the environment but the life on the Earth would not be possible. There are a lot of dangerous examples of the effects of global warming such as changes to the natural environment, to ecosystems and human societies in the world and many of them are already visible including climate variability and human health. For example, a 2019 study proved that climate change caused by global warming is one of the most serious problems that the world is facing today.
However, many disagree with this and think that deforestation is more serious problem which humanity has at the moment and believe that the society must work together towards this issue. Despite this, this essay notices that numerous woodlands which were cut down can be replanted again. That is to say that deforestation, even it damages the environment significantly, is a recoverable process. It is therefore disagreed that logging has a more harmful impact on our world. For example, Green Planet Company in Ukraine confirmed that new agricultural fields were fringed by large amounts of recently planted trees.
In conclusion, while damage caused by global warming is obviously considerable for the planet, many still feel that the society should concentrate on deforestation instead. However, as long as we can recover world's forests the humanity should pay more attention towards global warming.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, still, therefore, whereas, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 7.30460921844 246% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1699.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 323.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2600619195 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71445532135 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557275541796 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 524.7 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.7363531697 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.357142857 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0714285714 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.64285714286 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263083001921 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0843725123576 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0587776224975 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155027340679 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0336036078201 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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