While studying some students take weekend or evening jobs to help with expenditure. How do you feel about this? What are the drawbacks and benefits of such a decision?
It is quite common to see some students pursuing part time jobs along with their studies. It is very common in case of foreign students who take up weekend or evening jobs to support their studies. In my opinion it is a positive sign as it will give help in overall development of the student or will make him mentally strong to accept the challenges in their life. The subject ‘earning while learning’ has positives as well as negatives. We will discuss both the sides in this essay.
Firstly, earning by working in the free time and hereby meeting the expenses for studies is a great idea. Fo...
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although it has negative side but the positive impacts overshadows the drawback
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