Why are Cities Becoming Overcrowded?
The fact that the world’s cities are getting more and more crowded is well-known. Cities such as Tokyo, Sao Paolo, Bombay and Shanghai are now considered ‘mega-cities’, because of their enormous size and huge populations. There are two main reasons why these and other cities are becoming so crowded; one economic, the other socio-cultural.
First, the primary cause of cities becoming so crowded is economic. As a country develops, its cities become the engines of development, thus jobs are available in these areas. Frankfurt, Istanbul, Bombay and Sao Paolo are all the economic centres of their countries. For example, Tokyo was the motor for Japan’s rapid economic development in the 1960’s and 70’s; as a result, its population increased rapidly. People moved to Tokyo because they could find employment and establish economic security for themselves and their families there.
Second, another factor in the huge increase in urban populations is the socio-cultural factor. Thousands of people migrate to the cities not only for jobs but also for educational and personal reasons. The better universities are always located in big cities and this attracts thousands of students every year, and these students stay on and work in the city after they graduate. Moreover, young people will move to the city as the villages and rural areas are more custom and tradition oriented. Therefore, young people believe this is an obstacle to their personal freedom.
In conclusion, economic and cultural factors are the major causes of huge urban population. People will always move to the areas which provide opportunity and to the places which can give them the freedom they desire.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'moreover', 'second', 'so', 'therefore', 'thus', 'well', 'as to', 'for example', 'in conclusion', 'such as', 'as a result']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.256172839506 0.247107183377 104% => OK
Verbs: 0.12037037037 0.155533422707 77% => OK
Adjectives: 0.114197530864 0.0946595960268 121% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0401234567901 0.0501214627716 80% => OK
Pronouns: 0.033950617284 0.0437548338989 78% => OK
Prepositions: 0.0864197530864 0.122226691241 71% => OK
Participles: 0.0277777777778 0.0403226058552 69% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.97607268218 2.80594681477 106% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0185185185185 0.0326793684256 57% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0895061728395 0.0861772015684 104% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0123456790123 0.021408717616 58% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00925925925926 0.011925033212 78% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1713.0 1933.35771543 89% => OK
No of words: 269.0 316.048096192 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.36802973978 6.12580529183 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20517956788 96% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.405204460967 0.374742101984 108% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.304832713755 0.28420135186 107% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.226765799257 0.203846283523 111% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.137546468401 0.137316102897 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97607268218 2.80594681477 106% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.037074148 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.57249070632 0.56093040696 102% => OK
Word variations: 58.8719316013 60.7387585426 97% => OK
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0891783567 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.9333333333 20.7743622355 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.8124507919 49.517814964 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.2 127.492653851 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9333333333 20.7743622355 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.933333333333 0.814263465372 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 3.99599198397 0% => OK
Readability: 48.4166047088 49.1944974215 98% => OK
Elegance: 1.90476190476 1.69124875643 113% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163550343442 0.332605444948 49% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0989034205585 0.102741220458 96% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0737649860059 0.0668466124924 110% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.534507332621 0.534860350844 100% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.122714597635 0.148594505496 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0786306045974 0.134430193775 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0841166726643 0.0742795772207 113% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.434571891561 0.324371583561 134% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.028340465455 0.0638462369009 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126057466224 0.228012699653 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101127345168 0.058150111329 174% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.68436873747 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.41683366733 205% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 5.0 5.90881763527 85% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 2.5751503006 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 6.0 1.9629258517 306% => OK
Total topic words: 11.0 10.4468937876 105% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.