It is irrefutable that in todays contemporary world many youngesters prefer to study or work in urban places. In this essay, I will write both pros and cons sides, and give my opinion with several examples.
To begin with, in urban places have batter facilities than rural areas. Firstly, many prestigious universities, schools are located in cities and, the quality of education is well controlled. In additon, the studying capuses are accurately constructed and, it aids to create academic atmasphere. However, in some cases students have to study in desnse. Secondly, after they gained well qualifications that can open the door to better job opportunities in city. As a consequanse, people do not want to come back hometown.
On the other hand, we can see some setbcacks for youngesters who are coming from rural areas. Innitially, they may have to alone in unfamiliar place and, sometimes they have to find accomidation and pay bills. Nevertheless, these experienses may assist them to be powerful in the future life.
To sum up, studying and working in urban places are better than rural areas which is gaining a high qualificatins and better job perspectives. In some cases it will uncovinient for cities citizen but it perhaps give chances for youngesters who are coming to rural places.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, may, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, well, in some cases, to begin with, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1086.0 1615.20841683 67% => OK
No of words: 213.0 315.596192385 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0985915493 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93269065354 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.633802816901 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 351.9 506.74238477 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.2689673327 49.4020404114 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 83.5384615385 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3846153846 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6923076923 7.06120827912 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 5.01903807615 379% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145758635996 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0482838968636 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0409112879462 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0840459208773 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0400257025125 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.0 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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