The widespread of the Internet has brought many problems. What do you think are the main problems associated with the use of the web? What solutions can you suggest?

Internet plays, without doubt, a significant and massive role in human's life. It is believed that huge uses of the Internet creates many problems for society as well as an individual. A few feasible causes and solutions for this Global problem would subsequently be analysed.

First and formost point is that it is the reality of today's internet has made man's life very faster and easier. But the overuse of internet is, undoubtedly, harmful for human being. Firstly most people send email for official and personal Communications but sometimes it creates the problem like the privacy issue. For example, last year a hacker used a Malware virus and leaked the private information of some famous personalities by their email. Furthermore, we cannot neglect its negative impact on the environment and human health. Internet towers release UV waves which are the main reason for skin cancer and it also puts the negative effect on birds route.

Nevertheless, some major judicious measures need to be taken to solve this alarming problem. we cannot imagine our life without the internet. So we should take some steps to curb its negative impact. Firstly, the government must make some strict laws to prevent illegal activity on the internet, for example, every user of the Internet should submit his identity in the government office and also should start some campaign to aware people from illegal activities. In addition, social media companies should also provide more security features. Furthermore, we cannot deny the importance of our nature. So we should establish towers in the specific area.

In conclusion after having both the ideas in my knowledge, I would like to assert that if the above-mentioned measures are taken into account this serious problem would certainly be minimised if not eradicated in entirely.

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Average: 9.5 (3 votes)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, nevertheless, so, well, for example, in addition, in conclusion, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1535.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20338983051 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70729700117 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.627118644068 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 498.6 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 56.9576422474 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.2941176471 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3529411765 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0949723770344 0.244688304435 39% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.031544553631 0.084324248473 37% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0323064922063 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0630518923092 0.151304729494 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0427896054004 0.056905535591 75% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.58 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.56 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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