The widespread use of Internet has brought many problems. What do you think are the main problems associated with the use of Internet? What solutions can you suggest?
Although,internet plays a vital role in this era we can do anything on internet.In this genration internet used by people on the behalf of widespread.I m going to share my opinion i will reflect it both point advantages or disadvantages
First of all,in technological era internet plays very important role in trade works as well education matters internet has alot of benifits nowadays in today’s time most of the works are done by the help of internet even in present genration education is online on internet all the exams is organise on internet because it has a alot of security rather than other mathods. Although,all the bank affairs re done on internet in today’s geneation such as: internet banking,money transfer these all works are done by internet we can do this at our home office so on.
On other hand,internet has some nagetive points some people missuse these facility also numbers of chlidren
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ome nagetive points some people missuse these facility also numbers of chlidren
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, so, well, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 10.4138276553 10% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 7.30460921844 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 771.0 1615.20841683 48% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 153.0 315.596192385 48% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03921568627 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51700396316 4.20363070211 84% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08273709126 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 176.041082164 55% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.633986928105 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 256.5 506.74238477 51% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 16.0721442886 19% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 51.0 20.2975951904 251% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 223.690758762 49.4020404114 453% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 257.0 106.682146367 241% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 51.0 20.7667163134 246% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 16.0 7.06120827912 227% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210889751167 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129799424811 0.084324248473 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0628679002658 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137892283306 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0650610363314 0.056905535591 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 27.8 13.0946893788 212% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 11.25 50.2224549098 22% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 24.4 11.3001002004 216% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.84 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.98 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 78.4519038076 47% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 60.0 9.78957915832 613% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 22.4 10.1190380762 221% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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