Without capital punishment (the death penalty) our lives are less secure and crimes of
violence increase. Capital punishment in essential to control violence in society.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
The death penalty is a kind of punishment which considered for some of the crimes. This is a problem of controversy. Some people believe that it is necessary for our security while others claims the opposite. In spite of all possible advantages of the death penalty in the community, In my opinion, capital punishment in some cases may worse community condition and made new issues for society. With that in mind, in the following paragraph, I explain my reasons.
A study done by researcher concluded that mercy is more applicable than punishment for criminal. Criminal was convicted to prison in many cases were modified. Also, it should be noted that some of them were poor people who were not educated well while by educating them and giving them appropriate job, most of them live like other society members.
The second reason is about innocent people who was convicted to death and after while was discriminated innocent. There are a so many similar cases in the verdict. For instance, there was a man who known guilty in the verdict and sentenced to lifelong prison in the USA, after updating technologies and doing some experiment, was found out he was innocent. He freed and keep up his life.
In short, answering violence by violence is not good solution for society. Giving other opportunity to guilty individuals with guiding them may help the society and bring more security.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 64, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...kind of punishment which considered for some of the crimes. This is a problem of controvers...
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Line 3, column 194, Rule ID: WHO_NOUN[1]
Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a known'.
Suggestion: who is a known
... verdict. For instance, there was a man who known guilty in the verdict and sentenced to ...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, second, so, well, while, for instance, in short, kind of, in many cases, in my opinion, in some cases, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1162.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 235.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94468085106 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91531732006 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67275372871 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.570212765957 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 378.0 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 53.0894989424 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.0 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7857142857 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.21428571429 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145882676375 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0502052204673 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0528153323295 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0859173889641 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0740941767086 0.056905535591 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.0946893788 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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