DO YOU AGREE OR DISAGREE. IN 20 YEARS LATER THERE WILL BE FEWER CAR IN USE?
Cars are one of the amazing invention in human history which change variety aspects of human life. They take an important role in our life but technologies are updating every day, so at result some people may divinate that at future, cars were eliminated from our lives. I reject this idea and elaborate my reasons in following paragraph.
begine with, there is be a correlation between updating technologies and using newer and higher tech in cars. Big companies are working on projectes to eliminate driver and simulatiounsly reduce the cost of cars. That driverless cars need no licence and it cancommunicate with other cars by signals which help to reduce accident.It sould be noted that, this will be very beneficial for people with disability.
Second important point is about transportation. Using cars in diverse field causes a solid solidarity between human and vechicle that could not break. for example, two weeks ago suddenly i felt bad headache and i was only in street and no one help me. I used my smartphone and take a taxi. Deriver take me to hospital and after that to home.
Last point should be regarded is about shifting cars fuel to green fuel which make them suitable for use and reduce population.
At last I think salling cars will be increased because it is dynamic industries and every day you may hear about new technology which can fassillate your driving that encourage you more to buy a car or change your car by newer one.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, second, so, for example, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 43.0788530466 65% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 52.1666666667 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1210.0 1977.66487455 61% => OK
No of words: 251.0 407.700716846 62% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82071713147 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.48103885553 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66820455858 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 212.727598566 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.633466135458 0.524837075471 121% => OK
syllable_count: 397.8 618.680645161 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.1506848425 48.9658058833 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.0769230769 100.406767564 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3076923077 20.6045352989 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.53846153846 5.45110844103 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193714183453 0.236089414692 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0582181385965 0.076458572812 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0596564349647 0.0737576698707 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108356466868 0.150856017488 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0519403709082 0.0645574589148 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 10.9000537634 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 86.8835125448 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
More content wanted.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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