The table below shows the figures for imprisonment in five countries between 1930 and
1980.
Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below
The bar chart shows a comparison of the number of imprisonment in the five countries over a period of 50 years starting from 1930.
According to the bar chart, first of all, it could be seen that till 1960, Great Britain had a smaller number of imprisonment among the other countries. Added, in this country, the amount of people who were convicted to the jail had a gradual increase from 25 to 80 thousands until 1980.
Based on the table, Canada, New Zealand and Australia experienced some changes in the number of jailer, eventually they experienced a gradual declining from 1930 to 1980. It is immediately apparent from the table that US enjoys fluctuations in the imprisonment's figures. As it can be observed, it had overall increasing in imprisonment during 50 years.
To wrap it up, form five countries, three of them have decreased the crimes which led to imprisonment declining. On the other hand, US and great Britain had a increasing in the figures of imprisonment during 50 years that illustrate the crimes's increasing.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 157, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...he other hand, US and great Britain had a increasing in the figures of imprisonme...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, so, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 5.60731707317 232% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 860.0 965.302439024 89% => OK
No of words: 175.0 196.424390244 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91428571429 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63713576256 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94373911888 2.65546596893 111% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 106.607317073 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588571428571 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 247.5 283.868780488 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.1796684123 43.030603864 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.5 112.824112599 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.875 22.9334400587 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.25 5.23603664747 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.111323092001 0.215688989381 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.053093901348 0.103423049105 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0441935408772 0.0843802449381 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0795319529734 0.15604864568 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0491430268766 0.0819641961636 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.2329268293 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 61.2550243902 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 11.4140731707 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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