The charts below give information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The charts below compare the percentage of the population’s ages of Yemen and Italy in 2002 and projection for 2050. Population ages are categorized into three groups namely, 0-14, 15-59 and over 60 years.
As it can be observed in the Yemen charts, a slight increase will be on the percentage of the elderly people (3.6%-5.7%). The number of young people will raise about 11% (46.3%-57.3%). Apart from this, kid and adolescent population will decrease (50.1%-37%).
Based on the below pie charts, Italy experienced the same pattern prediction as Yemen except for young people group which surprisingly will be a decline (61.6%-46.2%).
To sum up, according to the four charts, due to the decreasing the number of pupils which have less than 14 years in both countries, there will be big challenge about population decreasing in the future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apart from, except for, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 1.00243902439 599% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 708.0 965.302439024 73% => OK
No of words: 138.0 196.424390244 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13043478261 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.42743929552 3.73543355544 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90144782753 2.65546596893 109% => OK
Unique words: 86.0 106.607317073 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.623188405797 0.547539520022 114% => OK
syllable_count: 197.1 283.868780488 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.6847641778 43.030603864 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.142857143 112.824112599 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7142857143 22.9334400587 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.71428571429 5.23603664747 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156089239862 0.215688989381 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0845860384932 0.103423049105 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.112978955804 0.0843802449381 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103747778256 0.15604864568 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0974048293515 0.0819641961636 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.2329268293 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 61.2550243902 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 11.4140731707 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 40.7170731707 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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