News editors decide what to broadcast on television and what to print in
newspapers. What factors do you think influence these decisions? Do we
become used to bad news? Would it be better if more good news was
reported?
Every media broadcast selective news which is selected, sorted and edited from thousands of information daily. There are some value which be considerate in spreading news among people. First of all, they must identify every news ‘s persona and estimate newsworthy and impact of it on people. As greater impact on people, more benefit to media owner. A study done by researcher concluded that bad news has more impact on people and they like it more.
Also it should be note that politician has great influence on selecting news and there are some strict rule that every government oblige every news editor to follow it.
I disagree with that idea that we get used to bad news. In my opinion, in many cases, we can not categorize news to bad and good because that bad news is not bad for all. For example, increasing price of an article by government is good news for producer of that article and people who benefit of it directly and indirectly. On the other hand in the same time it can be a bad news for poor people who use that article a lot.
Plus, there is pure good news which can make every one happy. But this news has less attention as mentioned above and reporting them have not any benefit for media owner, neither people.
To wrap it up, reporting more good news wont make any changes. Bad news and good news would have their benefit and it is better to report them together.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...pact on people and they like it more. Also it should be note that politician has g...
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Line 2, column 19, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'noted'?
Suggestion: noted
... they like it more. Also it should be note that politician has great influence on ...
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Line 3, column 371, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'bad news'.
Suggestion: bad news
...e other hand in the same time it can be a bad news for poor people who use that article a ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, for example, first of all, in many cases, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1151.0 1615.20841683 71% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.56746031746 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.26688049212 2.80592935109 81% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.527777777778 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 374.4 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.882525145 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.2142857143 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.14285714286 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.304483444033 0.244688304435 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126758936101 0.084324248473 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0590365558828 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18438971151 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0492090393203 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 13.0946893788 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.93 12.4159519038 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.41 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 78.4519038076 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.