without capital punishment our lives are less secure and crimes of violence increase. Capital punishment in essential to control violence in society (disagree or agree)
In today's humane world, people look up and live peacefully without the death penalty. Many individuals believe that capital punishment have to be in our life. Thus, social life will be more assured to be alive. However, number of crimes will be decline. Still, Capital punishment is not necessary to control illegal act. In my opinion, i totally disagree with that.
First of all, It can result to punishing the wrong people. As a result, Many people suffer physically and mentally.There have been several cases of people who got framed for heinous crimes such as murder and drug trafficking and ended up being condemned to death. Sadly for some of these innocent people, the truth take a long time to come out and by the time the evidence that proves they are innocent comes out they would have been already executed. This is why many opponents of the death penalty fight might and day to get this type of punishment abolished.
Another reason why capital punishment is most inappropriate and inhumane act.It is a sin to kill. One of the biggest sins a person or a society can commit is to take the life of a person. A lot of researchers had agreed with that death penalty is too barbaric to be practiced by a civilized society.
By the way of conclusion, Certain crimes don't deserve the death penalty. Justice is only served when a person's punishment is equivalent to the severity of his or her crime.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, look, so, still, thus, such as, as a result, by the way, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1160.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 247.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.6963562753 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58337666784 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.611336032389 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 379.8 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.8007277963 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.3333333333 106.682146367 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4666666667 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.93333333333 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207333640701 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0736766916934 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0697642089879 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122370861434 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0602767497367 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 13.0946893788 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.68 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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