Some people think that it is important to use leisure time for activities that improve the mind, such as reading and doing word puzzles. Other people feel that it is important to rest the mind during leisure time.
It is generally accepted that resting in leisure time is good for the physical and mental health whereas some people argue and feel that doing some light activities is more enjoyable in free time. This essay will discuss both sides with logical explanation before arriving at a conclusion.
One the one hand, some people enjoy various types of activities in their free time such as surfing the internet, watching movies and playing games. These are probably suitable for those who have physically challenging jobs. For example, people engaging in physically demanding outdoor jobs like nursing or driving may prefer indoor types of activities for relaxation. Thus, it is sensible to understand that some light activities are helpful for those who are working physically. Another point is that some people who are doing sedentary jobs need some outdoor activities. Because after sitting all days in front of their computer it is good for them to do some outdoor activities such as doing exercise and playing games.
On the other hand, some people strongly argue that it is better to do nothing and getting complete rest is the best way to enjoy leisure. For instance, lots of my friends do nothing in their free time. This also have some good logic as they prefer to rest completely to refresh themselves.
In a nutshell, it is up to the person to decide whether they should rest in their free time or do some light activities; however, I strongly believe that it is better to do some enjoyable activities in the leisure time.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, may, so, thus, whereas, for example, for instance, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1276.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92664092664 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50504477514 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.513513513514 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 401.4 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.1491392721 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.333333333 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5833333333 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.66666666667 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.32536232835 0.244688304435 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126604793863 0.084324248473 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0864529460642 0.0667982634062 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.221738335385 0.151304729494 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0292453977858 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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