Working and studying from home

Essay topics:

Working and studying from home

It is true that people are more and more intending to working and studying by digital network. Reason for this vary, and I believe it to be a positive trend.
With the opposite point of view, some people assume that working online still have a dozen of restrictions. First of all, manual labor that always requires the appearance of workers is not able to work from home. Engineers, for example, they have to directly handle their works such as fixing, examining building process and especially taking part in construction process. Besides, there are a couple of featured jobs which cannot be done online. Officer is one of the most difficult jobs in the world. Local police must complete their missions guaranteeing the social security, therefore, they appear on the street and fulfill their task.
Personally, I believed that blended learning or online working is positive in the main. On the basement, online working is a brand new way to approach our works helps us arrange working time effectively. A university student selects both a full-time job and a suitable curriculum. Moreover, working and learning from home saves transportation costs. An employee spent one to two hours and 5-10 dollars per day for transportation, therefore, if he have a chance to working from home he both saving his time and budget.
In conclusion, the benefits of working and learning online is unequivocal. In contrast, blended learning and working has positive effects.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 447, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
...ay for transportation, therefore, if he have a chance to working from home he both s...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, if, moreover, so, still, therefore, for example, in conclusion, in contrast, such as, first of all, it is true

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1221.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 240.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0875 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93597934253 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78692071709 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.625 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 378.9 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.0235212757 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.4 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.4 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.37873610254 0.244688304435 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113883581996 0.084324248473 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.11204188265 0.0667982634062 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19469718151 0.151304729494 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0790219297738 0.056905535591 139% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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