Some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to working another country if they wish. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
Some argue that professionals such as doctors and engineers should be required to practice in the country where they are trained while others agree that they should have the freedom to choose another country to work in. I believe that professionals should have the freedom to choose where to work. This essay will discuss both views.
For starters, professionals should stay in their home countries to help improve the economy. Because, most of the professionals are trained in their home country by government-issued scholarships. And working in your own country will easily adapt to the working environment and climate. It is also possible to gather friends to eat and drink after every stressful working hour without the language barrier. Therefore, these professionals can choose to stay where they are trained.
However, skilled workers should be allowed to travel to other places abroad to enhance their experience. Professionals have jobs that require advanced education and training that may not be available where they are trained. This will allow them to get higher qualifications, advance their careers and improve their earning potential. In addition, they also experience more foreign culture, discover the customs of indigenous people. Therefore, it is important that professionals have the opportunity to practice their profession wherever they choose.
In short, professionals should be allowed to decide whether they will work in the country where they are trained to help boost the economy or go abroad to advance their career. In my opinion, professionals should be free to travel anywhere to practice
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 93, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... countries to help improve the economy. Because, most of the professionals are trained ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, may, so, therefore, while, in addition, in short, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1373.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42687747036 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92222931056 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.525691699605 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 417.6 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.1566391239 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.5333333333 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8666666667 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.06666666667 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.54993599954 0.244688304435 225% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.17780729022 0.084324248473 211% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.129826507386 0.0667982634062 194% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.363587179942 0.151304729494 240% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.117736532035 0.056905535591 207% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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