The working week should be shorter and workers should have a longer weekend. Do you agree or disagree?
Workers or even employers need to relax after contributing their best in their jobs. Some people believe that workers should have longer days to relax than usual, so they should reduce the days they have to work. Personally, I am of the opinion that employers should lengthen the day they work.
On the one hand, working for fewer hours than before can cause some negative effects. Nowadays, many countries in the world have economic depression because of some important events, such as the COVID-19 pandemic. In order to solve this problem, people must work harder than before. If residents in a country are lazy at this time, the economy in the country will be declined than usual. As a result, the development may be delayed and lead to some serious problems.
On the other hand, having more time to work than usual can tackle some problems. When workers finish their courses and have a new assignment in their holiday, they are likely to earn more money and improve their daily lives. These people can make society better than before, especially in contemporary days, when economic downturns appear in most of the world, including developed countries like Japan, and the USA. Another interesting point is that when people work harder than before, they can motivate each other. For example, when two employers work in a company, if one of them works and makes more money than usual, the others may not want to be losers so that he or she may work more than usual. This phenomenon can make a trend when these workers work harder than usual, so their daily can improve.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that employees should have more time to work, even on weekends.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Workers or even employers need to relax ...
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Message: I is a common American expression, in British English it is more common to use: I
Suggestion: I
...the days they have to work. Personally, I am of the opinion that employers should...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ed and lead to some serious problems. On the other hand, having more time to w...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...han usual, so their daily can improve. In conclusion, I strongly believe that e...
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Message: I is a common American expression, in British English it is more common to use: I
Suggestion: I
...aily can improve. In conclusion, I strongly believe that employees should ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, then, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1387.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81597222222 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31846442619 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.524305555556 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 428.4 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.4012209807 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.4666666667 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.06666666667 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190321246238 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.076714119466 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0711548857473 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149157067937 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0704221391455 0.056905535591 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Workers or even employers need to relax ...
^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 233, Rule ID: EN_GB_SIMPLE_REPLACE
Message: I is a common American expression, in British English it is more common to use: I
Suggestion: I
...the days they have to work. Personally, I am of the opinion that employers should...
^
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ed and lead to some serious problems. On the other hand, having more time to w...
^^^^^^
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...han usual, so their daily can improve. In conclusion, I strongly believe that e...
^^^^^^
Line 4, column 22, Rule ID: EN_GB_SIMPLE_REPLACE
Message: I is a common American expression, in British English it is more common to use: I
Suggestion: I
...aily can improve. In conclusion, I strongly believe that employees should ...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, then, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1387.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81597222222 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31846442619 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.524305555556 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 428.4 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.4012209807 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.4666666667 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.06666666667 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190321246238 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.076714119466 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0711548857473 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149157067937 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0704221391455 0.056905535591 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.