In today's world,researchers and scientists are working continuously for technology's advancement,by which this modern era is becoming automatic. Beside this it has resulted in lost of jobs as computers are reducing manpower by which tenseful environment is emerging for job security. Therefore, I will elucidate the places that may be lost and elaborate the problem which may arise.
To begin with, new machines and computers are required but some how it will effect place of manual workers. For instance,worker in textile industry the weaving and knitting in many parts of the world is done manually by citizen where as computer and machines has started to show their impact in that area by replacing workers. No doubt it saves time and money but it indicates a signal to unemployment. Subsequently,in Call Centre whenever we call them for any queries computers recorded Voice replace real person in many parts of the world.So it is influencing especially the lower level work force
Apart from this,unemployment will become a major problem in upcoming years due to this advanced Computer,residents will don't have any job for work by which poverty will struck badly. After that, when residents will not have any money,famine problem will gradually start to hold its position among unemployed.
Thus to wrap up it all,it can be concluded no doubt advantages are more of new technology but in some parts of community and unemployment due to this is also a major concern.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: somehow
...machines and computers are required but some how it will effect place of manual workers....
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, may, so, therefore, thus, apart from, for instance, no doubt, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1238.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 240.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15833333333 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93597934253 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13660069006 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.620833333333 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 393.3 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 87.3534045355 49.4020404114 177% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.555555556 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.6666666667 20.7667163134 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.55555555556 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253454576021 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0988229314501 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0641045300469 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138722995164 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0744804596677 0.056905535591 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.73 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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