The world is experiencing a dramatic increase in population. This is causing problems not only for
poor, undeveloped countries, but also for industrialized and developing countries.
Describe some of the problems that overpopulation causes, and suggest at least one possible solution. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.
Overpopulation is one of the most serious issues that many countries, both underdeveloped and developing countries, have been facing nowadays. Dramatically increasing population especially in urban areas leads to many negative consequences that can be mentioned, including decreasing living standards and increasing pollution. In order to reduce the damages of overpopulation both the governments and people need to find possible solutions together.
The first salient problem of a large population is the deterioration of people’s living conditions. As the population has increased rapidly there has been not enough food and jobs for so many people. A numerous number of people shift from the rural areas to the urban cities to seek jobs and better lives. Meanwhile the cost of living is expensive because of the shortage of food as well as other necessary products and services. Analogously, the healthcare systems have been facing an overwhelming lead to each citizen not being cared for well enough. The common spectacles in densely populated metropolitan areas are overcrowded, makeshift housing in slums. A clear demonstration of these problems can be observed in India, the world’s second most populous country struggling with poverty and the current Covid-19 pandemic.
Another consequence that overpopulation countries face is pollution. A great amount of industrial and household garbage is discharged into the environment poisoning the water and soil seriously. Alternatively, there are so many factories and private vehicles emit gases that pollute the air, leading to global warming. For example, Vietnam nowadays often witnesses an alarming level of air pollution as a result of a sharp increase in personal vehicles and construction sites to meet the demand of the booming of population in big cities.
There are some effective solutions to cope with the consequences of rapid population growth. First of all, the governments should raise awareness about the importance of family planning and the ways to control the size of family to citizens. Minor children also should be educated about sex and safe sex to reduce the rate of unexpected fertility. The other solution is to put in place policies restricting population booming. The governments should impose the strict laws to limit the children each family has such as the case of China, the largest population nation in the world, in which each nuclear family has only child. China has been controlled effectively its size of population so the country has had the great chance to develop the economy and improve its citizens standard of living.
To conclude, overpopulation brings the starvation, the rise of joblessness and pollution to many countries all over the world. However this situation could be prevented through education and laws.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Meanwhile,
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, second, so, well, while, as to, for example, such as, as a result, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 41.998997996 140% => OK
Nominalization: 26.0 8.3376753507 312% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2396.0 1615.20841683 148% => OK
No of words: 441.0 315.596192385 140% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.43310657596 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.58257569496 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01934228365 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 247.0 176.041082164 140% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.560090702948 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 755.1 506.74238477 149% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 12.0 2.52805611222 475% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.722513757 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.909090909 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0454545455 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.54545454545 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0712446610794 0.244688304435 29% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0210975415046 0.084324248473 25% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0332362731568 0.0667982634062 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0334680351662 0.151304729494 22% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0301572816589 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.5 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 136.0 78.4519038076 173% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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