The world has seen an enormous increase in flights for leisure, business and commercial purposes around the world over recent years. What do you think are the main advantages and disadvantages of such flights. Do you think flight should be taxed more? Give reasons more for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience.
Over recent years the global world has observed that expeditions vastly increase in terms of spending spare time and doing commercial as well as money-making activities,so these increasing number of flights might be advantageous in some nature ,but it have some shortcomings too which I will briefly discuss below.
By doing an enormous research,out-number of people are randomly passing hectic day for their international business conferences, and some want to spend their time for roaming purpose when they usually get free time,and as a result of,people want to get on flights for minimizing their travel time and tediousness by and by.do people? I can be exemplified in this regard,Nova,one of my cousins,had had travelled to attend the business conference held in The USA on the other day as flight seems convenient and time consuming.Furthermore,nowadays meetings are organized at business class compartment in renowned flights thus also sounds splendid and that can possible because flight numbers are rapidly increasing.
After observing advantages,evidently,there are some disadvantages exist.Upon taking shortcomings into consideration, augmenting number of airlifts are not ensuring safe flights because hardly can pilots and co-pilots get resting time so that it might keep pressure on them when they operate the flight,so how they can run the flight with full enthusiasm I don’t know.For instance, US Bangla airlines,a renowned aviation company,had had crashed the previous year due to the lack of gap between two flights time so that pilot couldnot focus properly.After rising the number of flights,generally out-number of aircrafts cannot serve their service up to the mark.
In my opinion, upon considering the tax imposing issue, imposing more tax should be beneficial for the countrys’wellbeing,so tax is in need of to be implemented by and by.
To conclude,having been addressed the benefits and drawbacks,needless to say, increasing number of airflights seem advantageous for our day to day activities such as spare time, business and commercial purpose.Had flight owners concerned with some basic shortcomings,people would have facilitated from airflights.The more flights will increase,the better facility we get.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, briefly, but, furthermore, if, so, thus, well, for instance, such as, as a result, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1925.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 335.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.74626865672 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.88242666397 2.80592935109 138% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.623880597015 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 572.4 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 55.0 20.2975951904 271% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 145.917404339 49.4020404114 295% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 320.833333333 106.682146367 301% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 55.8333333333 20.7667163134 269% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 19.0 7.06120827912 269% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 33.0 5.01903807615 657% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.274067964486 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.141412558473 0.084324248473 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0314096385773 0.0667982634062 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152460653747 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0365573572817 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 33.6 13.0946893788 257% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 7.19 50.2224549098 14% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.44779559118 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 25.9 11.3001002004 229% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 16.96 12.4159519038 137% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.22 8.58950901804 131% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 29.5 9.78957915832 301% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 24.0 10.1190380762 237% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 30.0 10.7795591182 278% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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