The world has seen an enormous increase in flights for leisure, business, and commercial purposes around the world over recent years.
What do you think are the main advantages and disadvantages of such flights?
Do you think flights should be taxed more?
In the last few decades, the use of airplanes has significantly increased for such kinds of goals as commercial, business, and free activities all around the world. In my opinion, I claim that there are abandoned benefits of the plane that could assist many people's lifestyles and careers as compared to drawbacks they might bring and taxes should be reduced because it impacts individuals' transportation and the country's economy.
On the one hand, there are many merits of air service. Firstly, they provide multiple amenities which are satisfactory for the people. To elaborate, many individuals travel to different places in the world and these may take a long time from one another. So, during the traveling distinct companies proffer a different range of inflight services such as entertainment, meals, and onboard wifi. As a result, these services can help passengers stay comfortable and entertained during their journey. Secondly, air transportation is a major part of the increasing globalization. In other words, many businesses and tourism mainly rely on the air transport system. Consequently, it makes stronger relationships between the nations.
On the other hand, air transportation creates pollution which has a detrimental effect on the environment and individuals. To explain, when a plane moves in the air it releases carbon emissions which amalgamate in the air and create "air" pollution, as well as airplane the side's wings, and the engine creates a powerful volume that makes "noise" pollution. In addition, air transportation developed competition between the plane companies which might lead them toward loss. For instance, the dominant airline has provided luxurious facilities on average tickets with the best route which can make it difficult for other competitors. Hence, others are going to be at a loss.
In my opinion, I deem that, if the government can reduce the tax on the air transport system therefore all classes of the population can travel to their destinations and the nation's economy may be increased which might be helpful for the other factors.
In recapitulation, although there are some drawbacks to the airplane system, it might bring a plethora of benefits which include globalization and many facilities which might be satisfactory to people.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2023-04-25 | jay1451 | 73 | view |
| 2021-09-26 | sheru | 84 | view |
| 2021-08-27 | Nguyenkhanhhuyen06082005@gmail.com | 84 | view |
| 2021-08-26 | Nguyenkhanhhuyen06082005@gmail.com | 84 | view |
| 2021-08-26 | Nguyenkhanhhuyen06082005@gmail.com | 84 | view |
- It is better for people to be unemployed than being employed with a job they do not enjoy To what extent do you agree or disagree 56
- The diagram presents the process of producing smoked fish Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
- Crime rates will fall as advances in technology make it easier to detect and prevent crimes To what extent do you agree or disagree 78
- Some people consider price as most important thing to buy product such as cell phone or service e g medical treatment Do you agree or disagree 49
- The diagram presents the process of producing smoked fish Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 175, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'nations'' or 'nation's'?
Suggestion: nations'; nation's
...an travel to their destinations and the nations economy may be increased which might be...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, firstly, hence, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for instance, in addition, such as, as a result, as well as, in my opinion, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1965.0 1615.20841683 122% => OK
No of words: 361.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.4432132964 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35889894354 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.17545296105 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.545706371191 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 608.4 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 11.0 4.76152304609 231% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.3698776905 49.4020404114 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.588235294 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2352941176 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.4117647059 7.06120827912 162% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0811098185555 0.244688304435 33% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0278567484029 0.084324248473 33% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0301115764274 0.0667982634062 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0529825325364 0.151304729494 35% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0348884739245 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.27 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.45 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 78.4519038076 139% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.