The world should have only one goverment rather than a national government for each country. Your opinion: Do advanatges outweigh disadvantages.
These days, the political affairs in the world appear to be erratic and complicated, with conflicts between countries occur in many regions. In order to relieve the issue, some people have suggested the idea of one global government that regulate the whole world. In this essay, I will discuss the benefits and drawbacks of the international government.
On the one hand, it seems that a global government could address some of the major problems that people are facing. Firstly, natural and human resources would be distributed more equally, helping developing regions to keep pace with the others. Currently, in order to receive financial aids from developed countries, the poorer ones have to accept various demands and policies, which tend to be disadvantageous to them in the long term. Nevertheless, with an international government, they could easily receive support to deal with their immediate issues. Secondly, this can stop numerous unnecessary wars since people are under only one authority. As a result, millions lives of people and soldiers will be saved.
On the other hand, there are problems associated with uniting all nations in the world. To begin with, controlling the whole world might be too complicated for people in charge. It requires country leaders to have comprehensive understanding about the local geography, culture, and history, so that the government could come up with appropriate policies that favour the country’s growth. Due to the cultural and geographic diversity in the world, this is seemingly impossible to achieve. Furthermore, racism is still a popular problem that hindering the attempt to establish a mutual government. It would be difficult for a country to develop if the citizens discriminate each other.
All in all, on the first sight, a global authority can be beneficial in many aspects. Nonetheless, in my opinion, this idea would be more problematic than advantageous.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 66, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
... that a global government could address some of the major problems that people are facing. ...
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Line 2, column 196, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[5]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to develop' or 'develop'.
Suggestion: to develop; develop
...ld be distributed more equally, helping developing regions to keep pace with the others. C...
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Line 4, column 169, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... be more problematic than advantageous.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, nevertheless, nonetheless, second, secondly, so, still, as a result, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1627.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33442622951 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.972568304 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.603278688525 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 501.3 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.5472021267 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.7058823529 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9411764706 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.05882352941 7.06120827912 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181863965788 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0544488876493 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0459590748182 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105589024959 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.044643346522 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.45 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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