The world should have only one government rather than a national government for each country To what extent do you agree or disagree

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The world should have only one government rather than a national government for each country. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There are numerous reasons why a global regime should not replace a multinational system, one of which is that it is difficult to adequately address the needs of every person on the global. As a result, some groups will be marginalized and the number of homeless and refugees could increase. More specifically, a universal currency, which would in turn reduction of the economic power of developed countries. At that time, the value of the currencies of major countries will simultaneously depreciate, easily causing disagreements and leading to riots.
Another justification is that the cosmocracy loses the national cultural identity of nations. When cultures imported and mixed with each other, many regions could not adapt and accept it. This would therefore decrease the diversity of cultures. It should also be noted that operating under a leader with malicious interests in mind will make the fear of totalitarianism. Instead of wars for land between countries, a single authority increased the chances of rebellion and civil war.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, therefore, as a result

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 877.0 1615.20841683 54% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 164.0 315.596192385 52% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34756097561 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57858190836 4.20363070211 85% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0442588421 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 176.041082164 66% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.707317073171 0.561755894193 126% => OK
syllable_count: 280.8 506.74238477 55% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.9754764173 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.4444444444 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2222222222 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 7.06120827912 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.38176352705 46% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0727469037591 0.244688304435 30% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0237162408931 0.084324248473 28% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.018088855649 0.0667982634062 27% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0524932593686 0.151304729494 35% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00793497265518 0.056905535591 14% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.75 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.31 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.

Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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