Would you prefer to live in a traditional house or in a modern apartment building Use specific reasons and details to support your choice Syerapke

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Would you prefer to live in a traditional house or in a modern apartment building? Use specific reasons and details to support your choice.-Syerapke-

These days, many residents in the big city afford the apartment, while the other choose traditional house to live. Personally, I prefer to live in a traditional house, and I want to examine my choice in two reasons.

Firstly, the consideration to choose place of living is based on the economic reason. In the big city, a modern luxurious apartment is unaffordable. So, we can see city inhabitants who are in the middle or low class favors to live in the traditional house. While for wealth people choosing apartment as housing is preferable.

Secondly, choosing place to stay is depended on per...

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