Write about the following topic:
Unemployment is a serious issue throughout the world. A number of changes need to be made to reduce the problem. What should governments do to solve this issue?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.
Redundancy is a significant issue these days in the world. There are so many essential elements that need to change to decrease unemployment. Moreover, governments mainly can improve the quality of education and create a balanced development for the economy to prevent job loss.
Firstly, governments should improve the quality of education because it is a crucial element for employment. Many students can be confident to work after graduation unless they have a good education. Therefore, governments need to spend more money on education development and encourage universities to improve the quality of teaching and studying, especially the lessons with applied experiments. Moreover, applying the trend of new technology and new scientific invention to education is important. For example, recently Artificial Intelligence has developed strongly in society with many applications, and in many countries, students have approached this topic to follow the new trend.
Secondly, even if governments can establish a balance in economic development to reduce job loss. They should be attentive to inflation which seriously impacts the economy and many people will lose their jobs because of this. Urbanization is also an issue which governments need to change. They can encourage local development which bases on the various economic strengths; therefore people can have a good wage in different regions. Moreover, reducing taxes on essential services and dropping the retirement age will be beneficial for decreasing unemployment.
Redundancy has always been a concerning issue throughout the world. Governments contribute the main role to ensure the limit of unemployment. Particularly, they can improve the quality of education and maintain the stability of balanced economic development.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 23.0 8.3376753507 276% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1548.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.77611940299 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16068343938 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.544776119403 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 490.5 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.4591340874 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.75 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.75 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.3125 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167093527883 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0590665201798 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0469196939396 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109368855851 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0182375192883 0.056905535591 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.31 50.2224549098 76% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.95 12.4159519038 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.26 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.