Write about the following topic:Computers are often argued to be the most important invention of the last hundred years. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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Write about the following topic:Computers are often argued to be the most important invention of the last hundred years. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

human beings have accelerated growth by augmenting their skills with the help of computer. Though computers have helped humans, they do have certain drawbacks. Like any invention, computes are also similar to double-edged sword. When used correctly it can benefit us, if misused it can hurt us. The nature of usage of computer determines where it falls. also, it is dependent the person and changes from person to person. The are many advantages which include, cutting down of mundane tasks, reduction of manual efforts , faster communication, ease of access to information, computation of complex math etc..

Having said about the advantages, computers can also provide many disadvantages if not used wisely. they tend to make human way too comfortable with work, make them to rely on machines instead of self. This makes them lethargic and careless. Finally, computers can be a boon or bane based on the nature of use. humans must be very much cautious on the usage and try to be masters of machine instead of being a slave

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Human
human beings have accelerated growth by augme...
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Line 1, column 355, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Also
... of computer determines where it falls. also, it is dependent the person and changes...
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Line 1, column 423, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...rson and changes from person to person. The are many advantages which include, cutting ...
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Line 1, column 520, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ndane tasks, reduction of manual efforts , faster communication, ease of access to...
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Line 1, column 603, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...information, computation of complex math etc.. Having said about the adva...
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Line 1, column 608, Rule ID: DOUBLE_PUNCTUATION
Message: Two consecutive dots
Suggestion: .
...mation, computation of complex math etc.. Having said about the advantage...
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Line 7, column 101, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: They
... many disadvantages if not used wisely. they tend to make human way too comfortable ...
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Line 7, column 312, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Humans
...oon or bane based on the nature of use. humans must be very much cautious on the usage...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, if, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 868.0 1615.20841683 54% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 171.0 315.596192385 54% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07602339181 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61617157096 4.20363070211 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71378384715 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 176.041082164 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.701754385965 0.561755894193 125% => OK
syllable_count: 274.5 506.74238477 54% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.142080737 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.3333333333 106.682146367 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.25 20.7667163134 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.75 7.06120827912 25% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.38176352705 46% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.122435597736 0.244688304435 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.04486867632 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0267055674055 0.0667982634062 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0973242399694 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0182893451972 0.056905535591 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.59 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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