You have enough money to purchase either a house or a business. which would you choose to buy? give specific reasons to explain your choice.
Money is one of the most essential entities of our lives. The given topic is highly debatable. the way of spending a large sum of money depends on an individual's way of thinking. I will discuss both of the given options in coming paragraphs and will give my opinion in the conclusion.
Money, if used wisely, can draw more money. Doing business is a great way of making money. to run a business, some key skills are important such as, a good planning and providence. if one has all of these skills, then only one should probably start a business. a well thought investment of money can earn lots of rewards in future. if the business runs properly, the initial investment made may prove to be a born. However, starting a new business involves a lot of risk. it does not guarantee fixed returns. also, if money is not properly utilized, one might be in a big financial trouble.
On the other hand, buying a house can be good idea in itself. Houses are becoming costlier by the day. Owning one's own place gives one a sense of security. buying a house would give one something to cherish and share with one's family. moreover, unlike a business, one does not have to worry about the risk. Furthermore, buying a house is a good investment in itself as it offers a future security. but buying a house can also be termed as dead investment as more often than not, houses are not bought for business. unless, one plan to keep repeating the selling and buying process many a times, a house is not likely to earn any benefit as in business.
To sum up, buying a house or starting a new business, is a debatable issue, and demands individual perception. as far as it concerns me, I would rather like to buy a house than to start a new business, as I am not sure about my skills as a businessman.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, so, then, well, such as, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 7.30460921844 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1474.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 330.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.46666666667 5.12529762239 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57575935829 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.533333333333 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 477.9 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.67632575 49.4020404114 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 64.0869565217 106.682146367 60% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.347826087 20.7667163134 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5652173913 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 28.0 5.01903807615 558% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192952974624 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0557663698852 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0400745166592 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0971014121818 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0576421856974 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.8 13.0946893788 52% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 50.2224549098 148% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 11.3001002004 57% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.05 12.4159519038 65% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.49 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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