You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The diagrams below show the life cycle of a speicies of large fish called the salmon.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram given demonstrates the life circle of a salmon.
It can be seen that there are three stages in a salmon's life, beginning with fry and ending with adult salmon.
First, salmon eggs are placed in the upper river, which moves slow, under the reeds and blended in with small stones. After a period of five to six months, eggs hatch and become fries, whose length is around 3 and 8 centimeters. Next, those fries, which are 12 to 15 centimeters long, will turn into smolt after living in the lower part of the river for four years, which has a faster flow than the upper one.
Smolts spend the next five years of their lives in the open sea before growing into adult salmons. Their length at this stage is about 70 to 76 centimeters. These salmons swim back to the upper part of the river, where they were born, to lay eggs of their next generation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 49, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'salmons'' or 'salmon's'?
Suggestion: salmons'; salmon's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 707.0 1615.20841683 44% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 159.0 315.596192385 50% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.4465408805 5.12529762239 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55098862472 4.20363070211 84% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.07880426177 2.80592935109 74% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 176.041082164 60% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.660377358491 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 203.4 506.74238477 40% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.60771543086 81% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.0268996723 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.375 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.875 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.125 7.06120827912 16% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0908410581573 0.244688304435 37% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0479492573273 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0432284096447 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0748832284744 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0449599982039 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 50.2224549098 154% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.53 12.4159519038 69% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.66 8.58950901804 78% => OK
difficult_words: 21.0 78.4519038076 27% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.