You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Some people think that the most important thing about being rich is it gives a person the opportunity to help other people.
Do you agree or disagree?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 254 words.
Being Rich is being every other individual's dream nowadays. Rich people ought to help people in need due to the fact of having a plethora of supplements and the ability to provide food and utilities to poor individuals. I undoubtedly agree with the belief to help other people.
To begin with, there a plethora of options for rich individuals to help others. Nowadays, numerous ways have been founded about donating. Helping underprivileged kids in education purpose is the best work any person can do. Besides, there are several ways that celebrities can also provide, For example, Akshay Kumar donated 25 crores to the PM-CRES fund in this pandemic of Covid-19 to provide sufficient rescue to diagnosed people. Rich people can also provide job opportunities to these people in local businesses and provide the chance for them to be someone.
Moreover, another example can be seen in the famous CEO of Amazon Jeff Bezos. Bezos is a philanthropist, he stepped down from the position of the CEO of Amazon recently to focus on charity work. He donates now and then to every organization associated with people in need. Jeff has done several charity works. By donation $100 million to Feeding America, the organization which supplies food to almost all the people of America, Bezos has shown how generous and magnanimous people can be if they have the will to do something.
In a nutshell, helping others while being rich is the far seamless thing a person can do. The more they donate, the more they will earn in the future if they donate their money to the poor and underprivileged kids. Rather than spending money on extravagant properties, donating to them is the most significant amongst all.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, if, moreover, so, then, while, for example, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1410.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93006993007 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7581008235 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56993006993 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 449.1 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 50.6567801484 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.125 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.875 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 7.06120827912 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228648776689 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0746215355081 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0538438390836 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138205536782 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0429438781944 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.