You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Write about the following topic.
It is inevitable that traditional cultures will be lost as technology develops. Technology and traditional cultures are incompatible.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 254 words.
Technology has advanced vastly over the last few decades. Hence, it is often believed that the world soon gets rid of all traditional heritage and values as their co-existence is questionable. I strongly disagree with this point of view, as modern technology complements the conventional culture by the method of preserving and distributing.
The most important role of advanced technological development can play towards existing culture is to protect the world's old history and heritage. This is because of the wonderful scope and opportunities which modern methods can provide. For illustration, the oral stories of the First Nation and aboriginal people come into the light with the help of modern technology like the internet, Facebook, the smartphone, and so on. Now that they know the procedure to keep this heritage and culture safe and secured, there is no chance that thousands of years of valuable history will be lost. Therefore, technological development will only flourish the culture and thus enriching it.
Furthermore, the internet is an excellent source of communication with people from around the world and thus can contribute significantly to spread a specific culture all over the space. There are a variety of options in hand in recent days through which people can know about a group of people and their lifestyles. For instance, researchers have found archeological evidence from ancient people in many civilizations and got tremendous support from modern technology to establish their findings. Hence, it can be said without any doubt that technological advancement complements the traditional culture.
In conclusion, it is illogical to suggest that our existing values and culture will be gone with the progression of science and technology. I recommend that through the proper use of the advanced technological method, traditional culture can be enjoyed more efficiently.
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| 2021-05-16 | AhaanIshaan | 73 | view |
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, hence, if, so, therefore, thus, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1615.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.47457627119 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13669426386 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.562711864407 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 503.1 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.1189483489 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.357142857 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0714285714 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262783089464 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0945328677635 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0540046155724 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170392493127 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0371903324633 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.