You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Write about the following topic.
Buying things on the Internet, such as books, air tickets and groceries, is becoming more and more popular.
Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 250 words.
Nowadays, online shopping is becoming more and more popular due to its convenience. But everything always have their pros and cons so what is the advantages and disadvantages of online shopping?
Firstly, you don't need to go the shop or the mall to buy things,which is too unconvenient to whom lived far from the mall. Everything you need is just a device which can connect to the Internet and you can choose things you want with just a click, a few days later, your items will be delivered to your house, that's more convenient than going to a shop and buying.
Secondly, shopping online can help to reduce the amount of people going to the mall and that help to lessen the pressure on shopping centre and it also help to lower the pollution rate of the city because no one will go out just for shopping.
Thirdly, buying things online can help to create more oppoturnities for unemployments to find their occupation to earn a living because the more people doing their shopping online, the more shippers will be needed.
But does online shopping totally good? I don't think so because everything always have two sides. If you buy items online, you will only see the picture ,you can't touch the items you buy,so sometimes the stuff you receive doesn't similar to the picture you see on the web or maybe the items was in a very bad conditions,for instance.
In conclusion, online shopping brings a lot of benefits to our human and also disadvantages,too. But I think we should accept the good and bad, nothing is extremely perfect.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, for instance, i think, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1274.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71851851852 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66518477343 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.544444444444 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 387.9 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 75.4674687728 49.4020404114 153% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.818181818 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5454545455 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189520691354 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.074602605855 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0601667584273 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102658113718 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.058405901603 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 50.2224549098 128% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.4 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 78.4519038076 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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