You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Write about the following topic.
Pollution of rivers, lakes and seas is a major concern for people who seek to protect the environment.
What are the possible causes of water pollution, and what effects does this have on animal life and human society?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 254 words.
As a matter of fact, water contributes to over 60% of the Earth's surface. Water contamination in rivers, lakes and seas has been an alarming issue on a global-scale since the Industrial Revolution. Sadly, the root of the decay of Mother Nature, as well as water pollution, lies in a majority of human's overexploitation, irresponsibility, and ignorance, regardless of the effort the rest of them who seek to protect the environment.
In many developing countries, where the citizens are still struggling to afford necessities, being environmentally friendly seems to be a luxury. In many floating houses alongside Mekong Delta in Vietnam, most residents choose to dump waste, animal corpses directly into the rivers - which they also use for their personal hygiene activities, as well as cleaning, since they cannot afford a proper waste water treatment. As a result, this does not only contaminate the water, as well as destroy nearby aquatic animals' habitats, but also facilitates fungus, infectious diseases to occur, and even dangerous viruses in the long term. There has been a ton of dead fish floating on the water because of this reason. According to a survey in 2019, people who live in areas that are prone to water pollution have 88% higher risk of diarrhea, cholera, dysentery, typhoid, and polio, compared with others.
Single-use plastic products also contributes in polluting marine's creatures habitats. Plastic takes up thousands of years to be completely discomposed, which increase the likelihood of it being eaten by marine animals. In fact, there has been too many animals' skeletons drifted to the shore whose deaths were caused by plastic being stuck in their mouths, or the inability to ingest plastic packages. Some are even considered endangered animals. Oil-spilling also poses a great threat to the lives of these animals, as well as polluting the water. It can kill off a vast area of creatures, just by minutes. Water pollution day by day is totally capable of causing the extinction of an entire species, which consequently can cause chaos in biodiversity, as well as other animals' lives.
In conclusion, as we are all citizens of one big house - the Earth, it is our responsibility to tackle this problem, as well as make up our faults. A propaganda on increasing environmental awareness is essential. Besides, developed countries should shake hands to raise funds to help poor nations have a better infrastructure in water treatment system.
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- You should spend about 40 minutes on this task Write about the following topic Pollution of rivers lakes and seas is a major concern for people who seek to protect the environment What are the possible causes of water pollution and what effects does this 89
- You should spend about 40 minutes on this task Write about the following topic Pollution of rivers lakes and seas is a major concern for people who seek to protect the environment What are the possible causes of water pollution and what effects does this 89
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, consequently, if, so, still, well, in conclusion, in fact, as a matter of fact, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 41.998997996 148% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2074.0 1615.20841683 128% => OK
No of words: 400.0 315.596192385 127% => OK
Chars per words: 5.185 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.472135955 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03470760719 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 247.0 176.041082164 140% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6175 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 657.9 506.74238477 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 10.0 2.10420841683 475% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.8966426316 49.4020404114 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.222222222 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2222222222 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.83333333333 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160839959433 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0436820600942 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0344352619572 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0903610576097 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0271679998692 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.06 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.74 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 127.0 78.4519038076 162% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.