Nowadays, in our modern society, people who committing crimes are more in big cities than downtows. In this essay, I will examine some causes and give suggestions.
One of the main causes of high crime rates is living in megapolis is quite difficult than in small cities or villages. This is because of high proce rates in big cities. For example, a man who lives in village might spend less money for accomodation or entertaining activities, while, another person in big city have to earn much money in order to construct better life. In some cases, such kind of people choose criminal ways to make money as they consider there is no any other way to live. To tackle this problem, security authorities should pay more attention and control the peolpe who have difficulties as they may be potential criminals.
Another cause, I think, the behavioral differences between people who lives in different conditions. For example, population in big cities are tend to be more selfish and dishonest, while people in small towns are usually more helpful and friendly. This factor may be additional element in crime psychology. In other words, people who live in big cities might act themselves more violent, as a result, the number of crimes may increase. The fair solution to this problem is difficult, but important to solve, unless our society will face with serious problems and prisons will be filled up with criminals. Yet,we have a way to decline crime rates by increasing public control and improving security systems.
To sum up, the government and publicity have important task against crimes in cities and in my view, these obstacle could be solved by increasing securty and control.
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but, if, may, so, while, for example, i think, kind of, as a result, in my view, in other words, in some cases, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1407.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15384615385 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86270239603 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59706959707 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 446.4 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 68.0 20.2975951904 335% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 254.948033921 49.4020404114 516% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 351.75 106.682146367 330% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 68.25 20.7667163134 329% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 30.25 7.06120827912 428% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.01903807615 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157112437171 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0989543721266 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0330624545759 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0989543721266 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0330624545759 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 37.0 13.0946893788 283% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 2.46 50.2224549098 5% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 29.8 11.3001002004 264% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.77 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.0 8.58950901804 128% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 28.0 9.78957915832 286% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 29.2 10.1190380762 289% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 30.0 10.7795591182 278% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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