You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Write about the following topic:
It is a common aspiration among many young people to run their own business,
rather than work for an employer.
Do you think the advantages of working for yourself outweigh the drawbacks?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own
knowledge or experience.
Write at least 250 words.
These days, it is a common aim of many people leaving
university to try to start up their own company. They
believe that running a business has many advantages
over working for someone else, such as the freedom to
make your own decisions. I agree with this point of
view, but it is important to bear in mind that running a
company does not suit everybody.
there are several benefits of setting up your own
business. For me, the main one is that you have room to
be creative. Instead of having to follow your employer's
decisions, you can set the goals for the business yourself,
which means that you feel more in control. this
generally results in people feeling happier in their job.
Not only that, you can also keep the profits if the
company is successful. if all goes well, you will earn far
more than if you work for someone else. For instance,
if you set up your own graphic-design company, and you
build a good reputation, you will be able to make
substantial profits. you will therefore be more motivated
to work hard, in order to make a success of your
company.
having said that, it is undeniable that running a
business is risky. if there is an economic downturn, or
you make mistakes in your business decisions, your
company can go bust, which can mean that you lose
everything and you have to lay off your staff.
Moreover, it is very hard to switch off at weekends,
because the business is always in the back of your mind.
To sum up, although there is no doubt there are some
risks associated with running your own business, I
believe the benefits ouiweigh the drawbacks,
particularly with regard to making decisions. However,
it should be said that not everyone is a risk'taker, and
some prefer to work for someone else.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, for instance, no doubt, such as, to sum up, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 24.0651302605 195% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1487.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75079872204 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49849652144 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.520766773163 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 444.6 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 5.43587174349 294% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.1129433785 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.9375 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5625 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0625 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 33.0 4.38176352705 753% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26252333312 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0954640990557 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0539415338924 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.066804953276 0.151304729494 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.057006833433 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 50.2224549098 138% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 11.3001002004 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.27 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.95 8.58950901804 81% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 78.4519038076 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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