Young People Are Leaving Their Homes And Villages And Moving To Cities, leaving only old people in the countryside
what are the problems caused by this issue and what can be done to solve this?
There has been a trend of people especially youngsters migrating from villages to towns or cities and unsurprisingly the trend is increasing in the recent years. This recent movement of people is breaking the back of the country’s economy and in this essay will discuss on the causes and the possible solutions to this trend.
Young people migrate in hope for better livelihood, lifestyle and education to cities leaving behind their senior members of the family who are left alone without much choice to mend their own needs in their last years of life. Youngsters lose on their cultural values, religious ritual which is passed on from generations and which leads to its slow death. The place they migrate leads to huge infrastructure burden, which was not planned for in the first instance leading to poor living condition and increasing the gap between the rich and the poor.
The solutions are easier, if the same opportunity is made available in the countryside for example, building hospitals, schools, college, providing better job opportunity for the young people tending to their needs. The trend will reverse and the youngsters will have less reason to move.
In conclusion, the demographic shift being a depressing thing can still be reversed with proper planning towards development of infrastructure and implementation of the same.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, second, so, therefore, while, as to, in conclusion, no doubt, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1489.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28014184397 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88363291104 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.503546099291 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 482.4 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 49.9897510157 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.363636364 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6363636364 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.63636363636 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167006150335 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0754284368602 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0916025643379 0.0667982634062 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0985699329731 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0422415734386 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.64 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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