This is a fact that the pressure put by peers affects the behaviour and lifestyle of people, especially, of young ones in many ways. This phenomenon has both advantages and disadvantages.
On the one hand, the trend of peer pressure leads to several potential benefits for young people. Firstly, some people get success in the early years of their life due to their great hard work, passion and dedication towards the work as they have their specific goal in life to achieve which motivates other people to be the same as them as well as attracts them towards their lifestyle. As a result, people begin following them and become passionate to achieve their target for reaching success in their life. Secondly, competition is required at every stage of life for growing with hope as this is extremely important to take initiatives in life for meeting the predetermined objective of life. Furthermore, Competing with others meaning keeping secrets in life and take benefits of opportunity that people get in their life which paves the way for being successful in life. Finally, learning from the mistakes of others is also a good thing as young ones are more vulnerable and they change could positively change their minds and they learn new things from peers that make them more strong and optimistic.
On the other hand, along with advantages, the phenomenon has some drawbacks attached to it. First of all, due to the passage of time, the tastes and preferences of people are changed too and they try to adopt innovative things in their life such as comforts of life. However, sometimes a few Youngsters are not in that condition to buy luxurious things and they become stubborn to have all those comforts of life like other ones which put a negative effect on other young people. In addition to this, the most serious issue in the society is that in some situations young ones indulge in bad company and starts taking drugs, alcohol and cigarettes that is a big evil in the community as well as promotes illegal activity and crimes in the society. Eventually, the promotion of bad evils not only spoils the life of young ones but also ruins the peaceful environment in society.
To conclude, although the phenomenon of peer pressure has some benefits yet it brings many drawbacks for the young ones if they adopt negative thinking.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, second, secondly, so, well, in addition, such as, as a result, as well as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1943.0 1615.20841683 120% => OK
No of words: 399.0 315.596192385 126% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86967418546 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46933824581 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56432745136 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.49373433584 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 615.6 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 65.7073365891 49.4020404114 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.785714286 106.682146367 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.5 20.7667163134 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.0 7.06120827912 170% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202098362265 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0803497876701 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0512699956709 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143153746314 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0349550897445 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 50.2224549098 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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