Human behaviors are greatly effected by their environment.All ages, particularly youth is greatly effected by the company they are growing together. Peer pressure has its own impacts. In my opinion, there are more benefits of peer pressure then drawbacks. This essay will explain advantages of peer pressure with some examples.
First of all , peer pressure is a great way of healthy competition between youth. For example, if there is good group of smart kids, it create a competition to get good scores and academic performance among children. I remember in grade five , I had very smart kids in my class. There was a big rise in my grades at the end of year and I gave all this credit to my friends with whom I was hanging around. So in my opinion, peer pressure has good impact for growing children.
Another advantage of peer pressure is that kids learn how to choose good from bad. Human being learn all their life but specially young age is best age to learn and get experiences of life. For example, it is seen that private school kids are more well behaved and organized. As in private schools all kids come from same socioeconomic group, so they have good effect on each other. So there are more benefits of peer pressure.
Although sometimes peer pressure can cause anxiety and stress among some kids but in general it has more advantages then disadvantages, Main idea should be that youth should have a good circle of nice people around them. Man is known with the company he has so it is important to have smart people around them
- In some cultures children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough What are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message 62
- Young people are often influenced in their behaviours and situations by others in the same age This is called peer pressure Do the disadvantages of peer pressure outweigh the advantages 75
- Some people use the internet to search for solution to their medical problems is it a positive or negative development Example and give your opinion 47
- Some young people are leaving countryside to live in cities or towns it leaves only old people in countryside What are the causes of this issue What can be done to solve this problem 63
- In some cultures children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough What are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message 56
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, so, then, well, for example, in general, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1281.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70955882353 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54182604479 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.540441176471 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 398.7 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.0126047286 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.0625 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.25 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262166739634 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0994421433001 0.084324248473 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0806563893308 0.0667982634062 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165791991057 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0624350309185 0.056905535591 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 13.0946893788 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.74 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.92 8.58950901804 81% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 78.4519038076 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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