Young people this days trend to be less polite and respectful than in the past what do you think are the reason for that and what can be done to solve this issue cause and solution
.Nowadays, increasing modern technology many youth generations do not follow the culture and traditions they are less polite and they cannot give respect for elder people as well as parents as compared to past crucial we must analyze the cause and this disturbing issue and explore the effective solution.
To begin, with there are several reasons for the younger people are not give respect and politeness towards their parents and elder people. first and foremost, many youth generations have no any idea related to culture and tradition they are unaware about the social norms for sometime they have a difficulty to understand the society and also they are less attend the functions and not communicate with each other, because in this day many youth people are very materialistic so they are not giving respect and show their politeness, second another reason they are not Pan time with their family and they always busy in their friend and mobile phone and also they are using more social media application and connect with other people moreover they are always following the based and culture they are a forget their the inner beauty and they can not giving respect that parents and elder people.
moreover, there are much reason which results in the unpleasant phenomenon and something should be done as soon as to mitigate this problem, firstly parents and teachers should give proper guidance, what are the best for them parents are teaching their children if you earn love and respect so you can give respect and politeness towards all people. secondly, the government should also organize campaigns related to motivations and vocational skills for the younger generation so they can easily learn. Thirdly, parents co-operate with their children and communicate with them so and asking their problem. In addition to these parents should teach their children related to culture social norms so there are solution the younger generation learns easily give respect and show their politeness.
In the recapitulation, in this trend generation, youth people are not following the culture and they forget how to communicate politely with each other. so parents should give guidance and counseling to their children.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, well, as to, in addition, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 28.0 10.4138276553 269% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1863.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 359.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18941504178 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35284910392 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48857695524 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.456824512535 0.561755894193 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 584.1 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 39.0 20.2975951904 192% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 199.692541451 49.4020404114 404% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 207.0 106.682146367 194% => OK
Words per sentence: 39.8888888889 20.7667163134 192% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.2222222222 7.06120827912 173% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196845155874 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0936444587423 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0791397103722 0.0667982634062 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135744672175 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0385901707829 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 23.0 13.0946893788 176% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.89 50.2224549098 63% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.5 11.3001002004 164% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 9.78957915832 189% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.6 10.1190380762 174% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 10.7795591182 176% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.