Young people is disturbed economics tend to become violent causing destruction yo life and property.What are the causes impacts and remedies of such problem.
Money is essential need of human being because without the money people does not buy the anything and does not fulfill their need. It is undoubtedly the case that the disturbed economics tend to become the causes of destruction of life and property or not? In this eassy, I will examine the possible reasons for the trend and suggest some practical polices measures that authorities could implement yo reduce this problem.
The first step is to understand why is the happening. Broadly speaking, there two or three main reasons for this. The first and foremost, is the desires of the people, people granted the those things which unlimited. Apart from that the major cause is the unemployment because if the person has not jobbed they do not fulfilled their desire. A good illustrated is that every people want to be live the luxury life and they want the more money to granted their expenses.
The trend could have many detrimental effects outcomes. Firstly, it creates the conflicts between the parents and offsprings. In this way, the young people go in the depression as well as the remove their stress used the drugs. Consequently, it leads the crime to epitomise, when the young people desires are not fulfilled they do the crime granted their wishes.
There is almost certainly no one solution is this problem given the complexity of its causes. However, one option has to be to improve do counselling of this problem. Moreover, people should control their expenses and desires.Furthermore, if the government should give the employment to the youth, in this way they solve their all problem and fulfilled their all needs.
In conclusion, there are variety of different factors that have led to make this problem worse. While, it may not be possible to find a complete solution of this, this could properly be solve by if the people control their desires and expenses and also they used the money in limities.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 227, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Furthermore
...ould control their expenses and desires.Furthermore, if the government should give the empl...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, so, well, while, apart from, as to, broadly speaking, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1603.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 325.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93230769231 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62623270577 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.52 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 485.1 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.4120038253 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.2941176471 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1176470588 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.17647058824 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158403359889 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0556903321691 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0909207758042 0.0667982634062 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0918769333478 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0634935649469 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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