young people in disturbed economies trend to become violent causing destruction to life and property. what are the causes, impacts, and remedies of such problem?
Money plays a significant role in every indiviual life with the help of money we can earn bread and butter for livelihood . Youth is disturbed economies tend to come violent effect decimation to life and property. In this essay I will examine the possible reasons for this trend and suggest same of the practical polices measures that authorities could implement to eradicate this solution.
The first step is to understand why is this happening? Broadly speaking, there are two or three reasons for this. The first and foremost in some countries is the lack of education such as Pakistan, Syria and Afghanistan people have less opportunities to get professional job. As a result, it creates unemployment because their basic needs are not satisfied. Apart from that youngsters should be adopt the desire for fulfilled our needs. last but not least, due to advancement in technologies they have more dream to buy more and more expenses things to maintain their higher status in the society.
The phenomenon could have many detetminal negative outcomes. Firstly, due to the shortage of money parents are unable to fulfilled the needs of their kids which effect the bounding between them. Infact, it has resulted in youth should be start comitt crime because lack of awarness. Lastly, it also impact on health so youngsters take tension about carrer or future they were mentally and physically weak.
There is almost certainly no one solution to this problem given the complexity of its causes. However, one option has to provide job facilities to every individual according to their education and skills. In addition, higher authorities should aware the young generation about the harmful effects of drugs addiction and provide caunselling to every person regarding this matter.
In conclusion , there are variety of different factor that have led to make this problem worse it should be solved by strict roles or law which should be implement by government.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, lastly, regarding, so, apart from, as to, broadly speaking, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1652.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 319.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17868338558 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68764855242 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.620689655172 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 511.2 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.4636227803 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.1764705882 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7647058824 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.70588235294 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 47.0 5.01903807615 936% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0950262024856 0.244688304435 39% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0289958438693 0.084324248473 34% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0581908496048 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0472685403475 0.151304729494 31% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0440324178917 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.18 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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