In your opinion, should young people choose their profession or should their parents choose for them?
It is chellenging to point out the best choice, however, in my view, young people had better choose their professions by themselves. There are 3 reasons given to clarify this issue.
First of all, no one can help them to find interested in their work. Although their parents can make them know what to do in frrst step, they can not follow their children until the last one.
Morover, deciding their professions make them to be more responsible for what they have done. If youngsters make decision to work for a company, they will have to bear the stess of this occupation as well as criticism from the boss. Their owner can give them the sack if the deadline have not been done.
Last but not least, the young choose what they want to do, they can find the job which are really into. Only they know their strenths and weaknesses. They will be able to promote their own growth potentiality, also they will have a chance to improve things that are not good.
In conclusion, self-making decision is one thing to develop them better day by day.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 26, Rule ID: HELP_TO_FIND[1]
Message: This phrase is probably grammatically incorrect. Write 'help them find' instead.
Suggestion: help them find
... this issue. First of all, no one can help them to find interested in their work. Although thei...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, really, so, well, in conclusion, as well as, first of all, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 860.0 1615.20841683 53% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 188.0 315.596192385 60% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.57446808511 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 4.20363070211 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34851117802 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 176.041082164 64% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.601063829787 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 249.3 506.74238477 49% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.60771543086 81% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.7555227187 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.1818181818 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0909090909 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.09090909091 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26053484176 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103388208925 0.084324248473 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0715151509151 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139210947187 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0622517321219 0.056905535591 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 13.0946893788 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 50.2224549098 158% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 11.3001002004 57% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.93 12.4159519038 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.58 8.58950901804 77% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 78.4519038076 32% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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