In your opinion, why is the circus still a popular form of entertainment in the modern electronic age?
Support your opinion with reasons and examples from your own knowledge or experience.
In the modern technology era, it seems like people depend too much on the Internet and virtual world. Despite that, the popularity of circuses still exists in today's world, and I believe there are several reasons for this.
It creates a significant chance for people, especially for kids to enjoy the performance in real life. Instead of watching the show through different forms of media, it is more interesting and compelling to participate in the real show. Children can have a chance to learn something out of the things in their books, so that will give them some exotic experiences. Taking a kid to a circus, for example, will assist them to explore more about the world outside and arouse their curiosity. The bond between family members will be strengthened as a result of various sorts of amusement.
Going to the circus can be a special experience because it is different from the things we normally do. We have to leave the house and go to a circus tent to enjoy the show. Usually, we can watch everything we want just by a smartphone, and that makes us stay at home for a long time. It takes us out of our daily experience and transports us for a short while to a different world in a way that electronic games or TV shows cannot.
Circus can provide us with some interesting and humorous experiences that are important in today's fast-paced world.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, still, then, while, for example, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1124.0 1615.20841683 70% => OK
No of words: 241.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.66390041494 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94007293032 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66382931873 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.597510373444 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 354.6 506.74238477 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 19.4270358579 49.4020404114 39% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 93.6666666667 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0833333333 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 7.06120827912 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0911238772401 0.244688304435 37% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0357465820549 0.084324248473 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0366516276301 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0648438780714 0.151304729494 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0290450699955 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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