All major cities of the world have a common issue of rising temperatures due to global warming. There are few people who think it would be more appropriate, if large industrial units are moved out of the city limits. In this essay, we will discuss the pros and cons of moving these industries outside the city regions.
One of the major disadvantages of moving these huge industries outside the urban areas is that it will increase the commute cost for its workers. This is because most of the workers in these industries will be living in these urban areas, so the distance they need to travel daily would increase drastically. Take, for example, a person who currently lives in downtown travels 3 miles for work, but when this industry is moved out of the urban areas, he will have to travel 12 miles. In my view, this is a clear disadvantage when the industries are moving away from the city center.
On the other hand, when large industrial plants are moved out of the urban centers the air and water pollution within the city is greatly reduced. In addition to the environmental impact, this move will also reduce the traffic congestion in urban areas. This happens because a lot of the commute and goods vehicles will be diverted to other parts outside the busy roads of the city. To illustrate, in an industry having 500 workers, which were previously situated in the city center. The workers used the busy city lanes to travel to their work, but now as the industry moves outside the urban area, these workers can take the express freeway to reach work and thereby reducing the city traffic.
Having looked at both sides, in my opinion the advantages of moving the industries outside the urban areas clearly outweigh the disadvantages. The improvements in the air and water qualities of the city along with reduced traffic are hard to ignore advantages, compared to the increase in commuting costs.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, for example, in addition, in my opinion, in my view, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1587.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 331.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79456193353 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5005653745 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.516616314199 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 504.9 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.2630210809 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.357142857 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6428571429 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.78571428571 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.244688304435 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.084324248473 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.151304729494 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.8 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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