16- Some people believe that in order for a hobby to be enjoyable, it needs to be difficult in some way. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
On the globe, many people have outrageous hobbies that challenge the conventional mindset of having a common hobby such as reading, painting etc. some people are of the view that a hobby should be challenging for it to be more enjoyable. I agree to this phenomenon as this approach is useful in many aspects.
To begin with, in this fast-paced environment, a hobby must be directly proportionate to a productive outcome. For instance, people who like to climbe mountains not only enjoy their hobby, yet achieve physical fitness by building their stamina. This challenging activity is difficult to achieve, yet serves the purpose of exercise for which they might not be able to take out time from their busy routines. I personally know a person who used to go on hiking on extreme steep mountains, It appeared to be quite a uphill task but at the same time that person was physically strong and he never needed to go to the gym for any additional exercise.
To elucidate my stance further, a unique hobby gives a sense of achievement as well, something that is done over and above conventional behavior. For instance, people who like to do scuba-diving, learn something new and they also get to explore the new world under the sea. Similarly, people who tend to try skiing for the first time experience something different by roaming through the mountains covered with snow. A forgettable lifetime experience, eager to do something uncommon is an achievement in itself.
In conclusion, I reiterate that having a unique and challenging hobby is a rational approach as it not only provides self-satisfaction but also has other benefits attached to it.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 511, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, similarly, so, well, for instance, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1380.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96402877698 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95180653916 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.589928057554 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 447.3 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.7216442671 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.0 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1666666667 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.83333333333 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237289632413 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0865530140503 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0995884950346 0.0667982634062 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127788178393 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.086211250818 0.056905535591 151% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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