Current research models have found out that between developed and developing countries exists not only an economic gap but also an emotional one. Although it can sound a bit weird and illogical, happiness seems to be a feeling present more in developing countries than in the wealthy ones. The reason of this paradox roots in several grounds, which range from the idea of happiness itself to the specific conditions of each country. First of all, the concept of happiness is hard to define. Generally speaking, happiness is a feeling that life is good, that our sorroundings are a bit brighter than usual and that we are in harmony with friends and family. For our ancestors, being happy was not a priority. While the concept of happiness has been around for thousands of years, we humans were simply struggling to survive. Quality of life was a luxury. Today, though, most of us regard happiness as something we have a right to, and therefore something to be actively pursued.
As we can see, defining happiness is not that easy. Many ingredients play a role in the pursuing of happiness and being wealhty is just one of them. For some people money does not even make happy at all. It is no surprise thus that surveys have showed that happiness is more likely to be found in poor countries than in the rich ones. Whether living in a prosperous country actually makes people happier is still up for debate and think that other aspects should be taken into account when speaking of happiness. A widely accepted idea of developing countries, tend to depict them as natural paradises with lush forests, clear rivers and white beaches. Local people are usually friendly and do not have to deal with stress, pollution, lack of human touch, traffic jam and a fast-paced life. Although this could be an optimistic description of a developing country, there are some clues of truth that we should consider. First, the landscape has its influence on our mood so that living in a sunny, warm country would be more delightful than spending a whole life in a cold and rainy city. Second,life in developed countries has become more and more demanding in term of performance and knowledge, so that employees are usually more under pressure than they were in the past. Tird, technology has in some cases taken over personal interactions, which leads to a lack of human touch and misunderstandings.
To conclude, from my point of view there is no surprise that people in developing countries might be happier than citizens living in the wealthy nations, because there are uncountable factors that should be considered when it comes to speaking about happiness. Social life, personal interactions, friendships, stress are perhaps more important than money alone.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1096, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , life
...le life in a cold and rainy city. Second,life in developed countries has become more ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, if, second, so, still, therefore, thus, while, speaking about, speaking of, first of all, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 31.0 13.1623246493 236% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 7.30460921844 233% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 63.0 41.998997996 150% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2288.0 1615.20841683 142% => OK
No of words: 464.0 315.596192385 147% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93103448276 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.64119157421 4.20363070211 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70079479208 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 249.0 176.041082164 141% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.536637931034 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 704.7 506.74238477 139% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.6093508956 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.0 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0909090909 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.95454545455 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 8.67935871743 184% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.303501871737 0.244688304435 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0764221594447 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0686756879574 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.216754399253 0.151304729494 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0118132635712 0.056905535591 21% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 78.4519038076 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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